::: hero ^ Book proposals, developmental editing, and ghostwriting # You know the book you want to write. *Let's get it right.* ::: lede I'm David Moldawer. I started out acquiring and editing books at major publishers, and in the years since, I've helped experts develop the proposals and manuscripts that publishers buy. Through Bookitect, I work with a small number of nonfiction authors each year on book proposals, developmental editing, and full-book collaboration, including ghostwriting. I'm a book proposal writer, developmental editor, and ghostwriter for business and self-help authors. ::: => [Tell me about your book](#tell-me-about-your-book) ::: ::: section #books ^ The books ## Books from *my publishing career.* ::: lede Over more than two decades in publishing, as an acquiring editor, a collaborator, and an agent, I've been involved with books like these. Once we've talked, I'm happy to send you the full list. ::: ::: covers ![Cover of Take Back Your Brain by Kara Loewentheil](/media/covers/take-back-your-brain.jpg) ![Cover of Your Next Five Moves by Patrick Bet-David](/media/covers/your-next-five-moves.jpg) ![Cover of Atomic Habits by James Clear](/media/covers/atomic-habits.jpg) ![Cover of The Personal MBA by Josh Kaufman](/media/covers/the-personal-mba.jpg) ![Cover of How to Be Good at Life by Ben Meer](/media/covers/how-to-be-good-at-life.jpg) ![Cover of Beyond Belief by Nir Eyal and Julie Li](/media/covers/beyond-belief.jpg) ![Cover of Wild Courage by Jenny Wood](/media/covers/wild-courage.jpg) ![Cover of Million Dollar Weekend by Noah Kagan and Tahl Raz](/media/covers/million-dollar-weekend.jpg) ![Cover of Feel-Good Productivity by Ali Abdaal](/media/covers/feel-good-productivity.jpg) ![Cover of The Sports Gene by David Epstein](/media/covers/the-sports-gene.jpg) ![Cover of Nothing to Lose, Everything to Gain by Ryan Blair and Don Yaeger](/media/covers/nothing-to-lose-everything-to-gain.jpg) ![Cover of Car Guys vs. Bean Counters by Bob Lutz](/media/covers/car-guys-vs-bean-counters.jpg) ![Cover of The Secret Knowledge by David Mamet](/media/covers/the-secret-knowledge.jpg) ![Cover of Idea Man by Paul Allen](/media/covers/idea-man.jpg) ![Cover of Use Your Head to Get Your Foot in the Door by Harvey Mackay](/media/covers/use-your-head-to-get-your-foot-in-the-door.jpg) ![Cover of The Price of Becoming by Ryan Hawk](/media/covers/the-price-of-becoming.jpg) ![Cover of The Creative Shift by Andrew Robertson](/media/covers/the-creative-shift.jpg) ![Cover of Awaken Your Genius by Ozan Varol](/media/covers/awaken-your-genius.jpg) ![Cover of Ideaflow by Jeremy Utley and Perry Klebahn](/media/covers/ideaflow.jpg) ![Cover of The Widest Net by Pamela Slim](/media/covers/the-widest-net.jpg) ![Cover of Leadership Is Language by L. David Marquet](/media/covers/leadership-is-language.jpg) ![Cover of Creative Calling by Chase Jarvis](/media/covers/creative-calling.jpg) ![Cover of Manage Your Day-to-Day by 99U, edited by Jocelyn K. Glei](/media/covers/manage-your-day-to-day.jpg) ![Cover of Present Shock by Douglas Rushkoff](/media/covers/present-shock.jpg) ![Cover of Brotherhood by Deepak Chopra and Sanjiv Chopra](/media/covers/brotherhood.jpg) ![Cover of Outside In by Harley Manning and Kerry Bodine](/media/covers/outside-in.jpg) ![Cover of The Education of Millionaires by Michael Ellsberg](/media/covers/the-education-of-millionaires.jpg) ![Cover of The Method Method by Eric Ryan, Adam Lowry, and Lucas Conley](/media/covers/the-method-method.jpg) ![Cover of The Accidental Creative by Todd Henry](/media/covers/the-accidental-creative.jpg) ![Cover of Eat People by Andy Kessler](/media/covers/eat-people.jpg) ![Cover of Personality Poker by Stephen M. Shapiro](/media/covers/personality-poker.jpg) ![Cover of The Referral Engine by John Jantsch](/media/covers/the-referral-engine.jpg) ![Cover of Making Ideas Happen by Scott Belsky](/media/covers/making-ideas-happen.jpg) ![Cover of Denial by Richard S. Tedlow](/media/covers/denial.jpg) ![Cover of Flex Your Feelings by Emily Anhalt](/media/covers/flex-your-feelings.jpg) ![Cover of The Snowball System by Mo Bunnell](/media/covers/the-snowball-system.jpg) ![Cover of The Space Economy by Chad Anderson](/media/covers/the-space-economy.jpg) ![Cover of The Leap by Ulrich Boser](/media/covers/the-leap.jpg) ::: ::: ::: section ::: split ::: head ^ Who this is for ## An educated author is *my best client.* ::: ::: body Bookitect is for experts who are ready to write. You know what your book is and why you're the person to write it. You've tested the idea on real people (in talks, with clients, in a newsletter) and it holds up. And you have a platform that fits the subject: a business, an audience, or a reputation that will bring readers to the book when it comes out. You've done your homework on publishing, too. You know publishers buy platform as much as prose, that the proposal is what sells the book, and that a good book takes real time, including yours. What you need is someone who has sat on the publisher's side of the table and knows how your book will be read there. One test I'd apply before anything else: would *you* buy a book by *you* on this subject? If the answer is an easy yes, we should talk. ~> [Would you buy your book?](https://www.mavengame.com/p/would-you-buy-your-book) If you're still working out which book to write, or whether a book is the right next move, start with [Moldawer Advisory Practice](https://moldawer.com/). That's where we develop the idea and build the platform underneath it, so the book has something to stand on when it comes. ::: ::: ::: ::: band #proposals ::: split ::: head ^ Proposals and books ## The proposal is *where the book gets decided.* ::: ::: body Nonfiction sells on a proposal, and the proposal settles more than the deal. It fixes the title, the argument, the shape of every chapter, and the publisher's sense of who you are. Everything you write afterward is built on it. I start every project with the question I asked as an acquiring editor, with a publisher's money on the line: what, *exactly*, is this book? Most authors arrive with more material than any one book can hold. I find the argument underneath it, give it a title and a structure that hold up, and write a proposal an editor can champion in an acquisitions meeting. When the book sells, I can stay on for the manuscript, either as a developmental editor while you draft or as a full collaborator who interviews you, builds the structure, and writes the book with you. Either way, it sounds like you. That's the first thing every client asks about, and it's the right thing to worry about. ::: ::: ::: testimonials ::: testimonial > When I came to Dave for help on my book proposal, I had an unclear title, a mountain of loosely connected ideas, and no idea how to create a compelling book proposal. Thanks to his work, I landed in-person meetings with seven publishers and signed a major book deal with Penguin Random House. James Clear, author of *Atomic Habits* ::: ::: testimonial > David Moldawer was the thought partner I needed to turn years of writing about systems into one big idea. He has rare judgment about which ideas are worth building on and how to frame them so that people take them seriously. His guidance was crucial to making *How to Be Good at Life* a #1 *New York Times* bestseller. Ben Meer, author of the instant #1 *New York Times* bestseller *How to Be Good at Life* ::: ::: testimonial > David made an overwhelming process easy, and successful! He helped with structure, drafting, and editing, and I secured a mid-six-figure advance. David was worth every penny! Kara Loewentheil, author of *Take Back Your Brain* ::: ::: ::: ::: section #editing ::: split ::: head ^ Developmental editing ## You're too close *to your own book.* ::: ::: body All of us are, me included. At a publishing house, the editor is the one person in the process who can tell an author "No, that's not going to work" and make it stick. I learned the job in that seat, and that friction is still the most useful thing I can offer a writer. A developmental edit is about purpose before punctuation. We look at what the book is trying to do and whether each chapter is doing it: the argument, the structure, the order of ideas, the places where a reader gets lost or needs a moment to breathe. I read the way your editor and your eventual reader will, then tell you plainly what's working and what isn't, with a recommendation for every problem I flag. I also work with publishers directly, on books they've signed, from the outline through delivery. Your book, your call. You'll just never have to wonder what I think. ::: ::: ::: testimonials ::: testimonial > David is a VERY good editor. World class. I was fortunate! Scott Belsky, founder of Behance ::: ::: testimonial > I've worked with Dave on two books, and am eager to work with him on many more. Smart, insightful, generous, Dave is one of the best book editors that I've had a chance to work with. Ulrich Boser, author of *Learn Better* ::: ::: ::: ::: band ^ In their words ## What authors *say.* ::: testimonials ::: testimonial > David is an outstanding collaborator. His ability to help me take complex topics and turn them into compelling writing is amazing. Perry Klebahn, Stanford professor, coauthor of *Ideaflow* ::: ::: testimonial > David was an incredible support: he took my thoughts and ideas and turned them into a marketable book proposal. Dr. Emily Anhalt, author of *Flex Your Feelings* ::: ::: testimonial > Hiring David Moldawer for my book project was one of the best decisions I've ever made. Mo Bunnell, author of *The Snowball System* ::: ::: testimonial > David exceeded all expectations and helped me turn my ideas into book form. Chad Anderson, author of *The Space Economy* ::: ::: testimonial > David made my book much better through very careful and thoughtful editing. John Jantsch, author of *The Referral Engine* ::: ::: ::: ::: section #about ::: split ::: portrait ![David Moldawer, smiling, in tortoiseshell glasses and a brown corduroy jacket](/media/david-moldawer.jpg) ::: ::: body ^ About ## David Moldawer I founded Bookitect in 2015. Before that, I was an acquiring editor at St. Martin's Press, Portfolio, McGraw-Hill, and Amazon Publishing, where I worked on bestsellers including *Idea Man* by Paul Allen, *The Personal MBA* by Josh Kaufman, and *Making Ideas Happen* by Scott Belsky. Since then I've developed book proposals for authors including James Clear (*Atomic Habits*), Ali Abdaal (*Feel-Good Productivity*), and Ben Meer (*How to Be Good at Life*). I also represent a select list of nonfiction authors as a literary agent (closed to submissions) and advise founders and executives through [Moldawer Advisory Practice](https://moldawer.com/). I live in Montclair, New Jersey. Every week I write The Maven Game, a newsletter on the craft of expertise. ::: testimonial > Every time it lands in my inbox, I get giddy like a 6-year-old about to open a Christmas present. Ozan Varol, on The Maven Game ::: ~> [Read The Maven Game](https://www.mavengame.com/) ::: ::: ::: ::: section #questions ^ Questions ## Before you *write to me.* ::: faq ### What kinds of books do you work on? Business, leadership, self-help, psychology, personal development, and popular science: prescriptive nonfiction that gives readers something they can use. My clients are founders, executives, academics, clinicians, and creators whose books feed something larger, like a business, a practice, or a speaking career. ### What's in a book proposal? A nonfiction proposal is the document publishers buy from. A strong one runs fifty to seventy pages: an overview that states the argument and the promise, a section on your platform and how the book reaches readers, comparable titles and what they proved, a chapter-by-chapter outline, and one or two sample chapters. ### Do you write the proposal, or do I? I do, from long working sessions with you and from everything you've already written, recorded, and taught. You review every draft, and nothing goes to an agent or publisher that you can't stand behind. ### Do you ghostwrite books? Yes. For authors who won't be writing the book themselves, I collaborate on the full manuscript: interviews, structure, drafting, and revision, in your voice. You review every chapter as it's written. ### What is developmental editing? Editing for the big things: the argument, the structure, the order of chapters, and the places a reader gets lost. It comes before line editing, and it's where most of a book's quality gets decided. I work with authors directly, and with publishers who want a second set of eyes on a book they've signed. ### Do you use AI? The writing is human. I use AI only as a tool, for things like transcription, research, and organizing notes, and only with tools that don't train on client material. ### Do I need a literary agent? For a traditional deal with a major publisher, yes. Many of my clients already have one, and we work in parallel. If you don't, I can suggest agents who fit the book. Hiring Bookitect doesn't come with representation. I keep a small agenting list, it's closed to submissions, and it's separate from this work. ### How much does it cost? Every project is scoped and priced in writing after we talk. Professional help with a book is a serious investment, which is one reason I work with authors whose books serve something larger than the advance. ::: ::: ::: closing ^ Next step ## Tell me about your book ::: narrow Write to me with a few lines about the book, who it's for, and where you are with it. If it sounds like a fit, we'll set up a call to talk it through. ::: => [Email david@bookitect.com](mailto:david@bookitect.com) :::